It's interesting - lots of different ways of looking at things. Disjointed, of course, but that was planned. I was a bit lost in some of the transitions, especially the one between the first and second parts. I liked the characters, though, and could see where Mary was coming from.
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Date: 2022-02-08 02:32 am (UTC)- Erulisse (one L)