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Week 12, Title: Scar
Mar. 19th, 2017 09:33 pmCan’t breathe. Lungs burning. Can’t breathe. Struggle. Struggle. Struggle. Hands holding her down. Too much water. Can’t breathe. Can’t move. Too much pain. Drowning. Drowning. Drowning. Need air. Rise. Coughing. Spluttering. Gasping. Gasping. Gasping.
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She sits on her bed, shaking slightly; salt from the brine still soils her skin. She tries to be good. She tries and tries and tries. And it keeps happening anyway and she can’t stop it. He says she’s a demon. She doesn’t want to be a demon. She wants to get better. Be good.
She hates him and is afraid of him.
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AN: I'm trying to improve my writing so any concrit would be much appreciated. Thank you.
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She sits on her bed, shaking slightly; salt from the brine still soils her skin. She tries to be good. She tries and tries and tries. And it keeps happening anyway and she can’t stop it. He says she’s a demon. She doesn’t want to be a demon. She wants to get better. Be good.
She hates him and is afraid of him.
( Read more... )
AN: I'm trying to improve my writing so any concrit would be much appreciated. Thank you.