Well done! I like the bittersweet hopefulness of the last stanza. It makes me wonder whether he'll continue taking the pills or whether he'll decide not to take them because there was no big revelation. But you leave me feeling hopeful here, that things will turn out okay.
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Date: 2022-05-17 08:21 pm (UTC)