Date: 2024-10-19 04:32 am (UTC)
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I enjoyed the progression you showed through Marla's life and beliefs. From god worship, to despair of never seeing them, serving them, and finally becoming one of them. For me, the ending was very unexpected.

Well done!

Dan
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